I get around the excess of adverbs and repetitive small movements by making sure the characters are always doing something. Why do you think Toby did so much cooking? A kitchen is seven hundred different ways to paint a mood or avoid answering or slam a cupboard door that don't require the stock words.
Hm, I wonder if turning it into a class would get me more porn...
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Date: 2018-03-02 07:45 am (UTC)I get around the excess of adverbs and repetitive small movements by making sure the characters are always doing something. Why do you think Toby did so much cooking? A kitchen is seven hundred different ways to paint a mood or avoid answering or slam a cupboard door that don't require the stock words.
Hm, I wonder if turning it into a class would get me more porn...