ext_26458 ([identity profile] the-emu.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] vanillalime 2018-03-02 07:45 am (UTC)


I get around the excess of adverbs and repetitive small movements by making sure the characters are always doing something. Why do you think Toby did so much cooking? A kitchen is seven hundred different ways to paint a mood or avoid answering or slam a cupboard door that don't require the stock words.

Hm, I wonder if turning it into a class would get me more porn...

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