So I finally have time to read and comment on this. I am SO glad you're writing these guys; I adore how you write their banter and conversations. I have to say that I wasn't expecting a dark story--at the beginning I thought you'd written something funny and light, so the first "reveal" scene was a shock. But all's well that ends well, and I always love it when Ryan is the one to stand up and fix things/be in charge. I will never, ever look at that book the same way.

I hope you're not finished with writing Rymon!